My first piece revealed a series of speech structures used by incredible orators to fire up passions while giving the reassurance of familiar storylines. My second gave tips on turning a mundane ‘the numbers are looking better’ address into a ‘join me in battle’ big idea.

Now, I’d like to stitch it all together, revealing a few tricks that will help you turn your great ideas into a a coherent whole. This is your path to crafting a great speech.

Start with the beginning, middle and end

It may sound simple, but it’s vital that you map out your first point, your halfway marker and your rousing concluding thought. Without them, your big idea becomes a firework on a foggy night.

This is an inherently visual exercise. By that, I mean ditch the Word program and pull out a pad of Post-it Notes. Write your big idea on a note at the top of the wall. Then define where you want to start your story, what the moment of supreme tension in the middle should be, and the thought that will get everyone out of their seat cheering at the end. Hang these three thoughts on the wall.

Now show a few people. If they ‘get’ it without any explanation, you’ve crafted the core of a very simple, powerful story. Now comes the fun part.

Fill in the story details

It’s time to put meat on the bones, adding the storytelling that leads us from start to middle to end. Again, this is a job for Post-its.

It’s critical you turn this into a team sport. You craft a version of the Post-it storyline, then invite colleagues in for a critique. Their primary job is to spot where your story gets stuck or meanders off the path. But they also need to hang notes of their own, giving you suggestions on how to make your story flow more evenly.

Speaking of story

If you want to create a speech worth remembering, look for junctures in your Post-it storyline where you can inject personal stories and anecdotes. Not only will these give your audience a much-needed sense of your humanity (vital if you want them to follow you into battle) but they’ll make your speech much easier to remember.

When we work with clients at Your Ultimate Speech, we tell them they should be able to have their slide show break, their manuscript disappear, and their jet lag kick into high gear – and still give the best talk of the conference. The only way they can do this is by peppering their talk with personal stories. If you’re nervous about delivering a tough speech to your team, rest assured you’re going to forget bits. The only way through is with stories you can tell in your sleep.

Slides? Depends

When I deliver a keynote, I normally use slides to illustrate and emphasize my point. When the president delivers a tough talk, he doesn’t.

Personally, I think slides are there to entertain. If you have to deliver tough news, entertainment seems less important than forging a powerful bond with your audience. Don’t let slides get in the way.

And now, allow me to contradict myself. Al Gore’s hockey stick slide in The Inconvenient Truth was incredibly powerful…and entertaining. Heck, every slide in that program was powerful. So, what to do? Read on.

Peer review

You want to try your speech out on as many people as possible before delivering it to your audience.

This enables you to get unvarnished opinions on your content, stories, and yes, whether or not you should be using slides.

Just as important, rehearsal helps you remember what you’re saying – you simply can’t be reading a battle cry speech out from a sheet of paper.

A bit of coaching goes a long way

The opinions of your confidantes helps. But the opinion of someone trained to make good speakers better is invaluable.

If you have time, have a speech coach watch you rehearse. If you need a speech coach at 5am the day of your talk, give us a holler. We’re set up for that.


A speech isn’t a play. It’s not about rehearsing lines. Ultimately, this will only work if your audience believes in you. And they won’t believe in you if you don’t believe the words you’re saying.

Don’t worry if you get a line or two wrong. Chances are, nobody will remember your lines.

They’ll remember your passion. They’ll remember your fire. They’ll remember that somehow, there was something in the air that gave them hope for the future.

Mission accomplished.

If you’d like to join my webinar on this subject Friday Feb 12th at 9am PST, click here to register.